Sharaiah F.

August 31, 2011

B3

Narrative

     Half the section you’re sitting in is singing happy birthday while you are on the jumbo screen, amazing and awesome all at the same time! It is a fans dream!

     September 13^th my mom, dad, my brother Zach, my brother Nick, my grandma and I took a trip up to Cincinnati, Ohio. Why you may ask? We were headed up to a Cincinnati Reds Baseball game. A day before my birthday, in a way, it was a birthday present.

     When we got there it was AMAZING! The sun was shinning brightly and we were all in a good mood. I could tell this was going to be the most amazing present ever!

     When we found our seats my mom and my older brother Zach went to go get some snacks. It was strange because when my mom came back she had a huge evil grin on her face, it was her devious face.

     Then out of nowhere she says to me, “Sharaiah, this is the assistant coach for the Reds.” The assistant couch gave me a certificate that said “Happy Birthday from the whole Reds team!” Then after that he started singing happy birthday, and then the whole section joined in.

     In conclusion, I had a fantastic time at the game. It was the BEST present ever. I could never imagine a better present in my whole life!